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Cart abandonment is your silent killer.
Good news? You don’t need to be a copywriter or hire one.

I’ve written 10 proven abandoned cart emails you can literally copy, paste, and plug into your sequence today.
Each one is dialed in to hit a different trigger: urgency, scarcity, social proof, you name it.
Use them in order or mix and match depending on how aggressive (or gentle) you want your follow-up to be.
🚨 Want to make sure these emails actually work?
Let’s do a Conversion Killers Call. Quick, no-BS feedback on where your store is leaking buyers and the first 3 UX fixes I’d make.
The Templates
1. The Gentle Nudge (1 Hour Post-Abandonment)
Subject: Forget something?
Body:
Hey [First Name],
Looks like you left something behind. Your cart’s still here, waiting patiently.
[CTA: Return to Cart]
Need help? Just reply—we’re here for you.
2. The Personal Callout
Subject: [First Name], your [Product Name] is almost gone
Body:
Still thinking about [Product Name]? Smart pick.
It’s a popular item—and it might sell out soon.
Snag it before someone else does.
[CTA: Complete Checkout]
3. Urgency With a Countdown (24 Hours Post-Abandonment)
Subject: Your cart is expiring in 24 hours
Body:
Hey [First Name],
We’re holding your items for the next 24 hours. After that, we release them back into the wild.
Still want them?
[CTA: Grab Them Now]
4. Discount Tease (36–48 Hours Post)
Subject: A little something to sweeten the deal
Body:
We get it—sometimes you need a nudge.
Here’s 10% off if you complete your order in the next 24 hours.
Use code: FINISHLINE10
[CTA: Redeem & Checkout]
5. Social Proof Play
Subject: Join 1,000+ happy customers who chose [Product Name]
Body:
Still on the fence about [Product Name]?
Here’s what our customers say:
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ “Best purchase I’ve made all year.”
Ready to love it too?
[CTA: Return to Cart]
6. Free Shipping Trigger
Subject: Free shipping? You’ve got it
Body:
We’d hate for shipping costs to ruin a good thing.
So here’s free shipping—automatically applied at checkout.
Your cart’s waiting.
[CTA: Checkout Now]
7. Mystery Incentive
Subject: Your cart has a surprise inside
Body:
We added something extra to your cart.
But it won’t be there forever.
Open it before it disappears.
[CTA: Reveal & Checkout]
8. Plaintext Human Touch
Subject: Any questions about your order?
Body:
Hey [First Name],
Saw you left some items behind. Got any questions or ran into issues?
Reply here—I’m happy to help.
If you’re ready to wrap it up, just head here:
[CTA: Return to Cart]
– [Your Name] from [Brand Name]
9. Final Warning (Last Call)
Subject: Your cart disappears at midnight
Body:
Last chance, [First Name].
Your items are about to be released.
Complete your purchase before midnight to keep them.
[CTA: Final Checkout]
10. Product Recs Follow-Up (Post-Sequence Re-Engagement)
Subject: Still thinking it over?
Body:
Totally fine if [Product Name] wasn’t quite right.
Here are a few other things we think you’ll love:
[Product 1]
[Product 2]
[Product 3]
Take another look:
[CTA: Browse Recommendations]
PS: Your abandoned cart flow can be your highest ROI email sequence.
Use these templates to test, tweak, and recover the sales you're currently leaving behind.
With kind regards / 🇳🇱 Met vriendelijke groet,

Philip Wallage — BTNG.studio
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